If you would like to understand this post completely and you didn't read the previous post, read it.
Before I went to Ariana's party, we went to see sea lions. Before we went to see them, we saw something that we
could go on. Elina, Elina's little brother, Kenna, Ariana and I went on a thing that spun if you turned the wheel.
We all had a turn to spin it. When we went to see the sea lions, I bought a postcard.
On Saturday, another Ariana went to the park with me. I asked her mother if I could come over to her house and
she said if my mom said it was fine with her, and it was.
Why I put the last comma is because I was trying to press the period and I accidentally pressed the comma.
I looked at the screen to see if I had pressed the period and I thought it could make sense that way, too.
2 comments:
Hi Nory,
I
just wanted to say that
you could put carosel instead of
a thing that we could go on.
best wishes,
Elina
I do not see a extra comma!
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